Wednesday, October 27, 2010

part of a longer poem about fall.

n the fall, i played soccer.



the grass was cold and wet and smelled

like moon

over jade.

we sat in silence

rolling up our socks

over our little

beggar knees

bruised around

the cresent

and ribs showing

the red and white cleats that slipped on our skunky tongue feet

seal skin

the feel of the

rubber knobs

press into soil

our duffle bags

smelled like road kill

flat over

luminous white

line of wet road


the sweat.

the sweat

made our noses

pink gums

and my curly sea hair

blowing upward smoke

feel tight tshirt

twisiting against

my side

the short orange cones

glowing houses

under the crucifix

field lights

like planet arm

silent

the legs moving oil rigs

silent

the trees bending over

over the fence

silent

the huff

from our lung,

silver fog

silent

our ponytails.

the sweat

in the cold

8 o’clock

nothing left

but gasps &

the slap of the crumbly rubber ball

against thigh

made the skin

go red

bumpy

and sting

among

the frost

1 comment:

  1. Mean comments? If you say so...

    Your pet is overweight! Your scrambled eggs are under-cooked and over-salted! Your furniture is not en mode!

    (Have I reduced you to tears yet? No? Hmmmm.)

    Okay, in all honesty, the meanest thing I can say--as it might catalyze a sense of responsibility not of your choosing--is that, great writer that you are, reading your essays and poems inspires me to write more than I do. So put more up, please!

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